|Reviews for I didn't mean to write this|
| MB 5/4/05 . chapter 1
pretty good. who's it about?
| Daniel 2/15/05 . chapter 1
Don't worry, Ren. I only hate you a little bit.
| Wally 2/7/05 . chapter 1
aw... I can't decide whether to smile or cry...so confused. WAH! *cries* This is very good. I can really imagine the distressed tone. *sniffle*
| SpiritualNomad 2/1/05 . chapter 1
good, writing is a good out let for my emotions ive found. i like ur writing stlye.
| lettersxtoyoux3 2/1/05 . chapter 1
i get that sometimes, where i just start writing about something i dont even want to think about, and i cant make myself stop. parts of it are really good. i like the part "I didn’t mean to write this
I can’t help that I am
With every fiber of my being
I’m trying to stop my hand"
i love that part, but once you get to "Trying to block the words
I so desperately need to say
And they are all for you
I didn’t mean to write this" it kind of throws off the way it was rhyming before. from then down i was confused with the beat and everything. and it came to be repetitive with the word "you"... but overall, i think you have a nice start with it. it needs a little editing, but it can be really great. work on it a little
| Maxwell K 1/30/05 . chapter 1
"You bring out things in me
I thought were only from fantasy"I like these lines the best. Well written indeed!