pretty good. who's it about?

Don't worry, Ren. I only hate you a little bit.

aw... I can't decide whether to smile or cry...so confused. WAH! *cries* This is very good. I can really imagine the distressed tone. *sniffle*

good, writing is a good out let for my emotions ive found. i like ur writing stlye.

i get that sometimes, where i just start writing about something i dont even want to think about, and i cant make myself stop. parts of it are really good. i like the part "I didn’t mean to write this

I can’t help that I am

With every fiber of my being

I’m trying to stop my hand"

i love that part, but once you get to "Trying to block the words

I so desperately need to say

And they are all for you

I didn’t mean to write this" it kind of throws off the way it was rhyming before. from then down i was confused with the beat and everything. and it came to be repetitive with the word "you"... but overall, i think you have a nice start with it. it needs a little editing, but it can be really great. work on it a little

"You bring out things in me

I thought were only from fantasy"I like these lines the best. Well written indeed!