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| Saeril 2008-01-19 ch 23,   | I really loved this chapter. But the ending was so sad... I felt really sorry for Izumi. |
| Arcane D. 2007-08-22 ch 23, | slightly confused between what happened from chapter 22 and 23. you went from contacting akira to killing a man izumi loved. i hope to see some insight on what foreshadowed such a future. |
| Gogoh 2007-06-21 ch 22, | I can't help but admit that the story was a bit monotonous. I sometimes call myself a psycho for what I am and it's hard to swallow that someone like Izumi actually shares the same mind as me! But, the fics a..legend! |
| Haruhi 2006-10-30 ch 1, | great prologue! i liked how everything went w/ the flow..lol. btw sry it took long to reply =.= busy ppl always find time to spare lol. i can't wait to read ur other stories. they all have catchy titles :3 |
| Zefie 2006-10-27 ch 1, | Wow that was a really good beginning chapter I loved how you started the story with the conversation. You should have this story published if you haven't already! |
| Hyorin 2006-10-04 ch 20, | i love this.It's interesting please write more |
| Yatori Shizuku 2006-09-06 ch 20, | Ah! That last line was an absolute beauty! But for Rei to ask that question about her father- it speaks of an interesting gap of- tension, perhaps?- between the two. Izumi's admitting ot be an easily distracted woman, and Hajime happily providing such pleasurable distractions, is cause for a smile. Rather cute of them. ^_^ Well done. |
| Micchansan 2006-08-20 ch 20, | I don't need to hesitate when I read who wrote this story... I always love your writings, and this one is no exception!! I love it! Update soon! |
| KonekOniko 2006-07-08 ch 20, | Wonderful as always, but when is your writing not? There were a few typos in the beginning, but that doesn't really diminish the quality of your writing. Anyways, update soon? =) |
| Yatori Shizuku 2006-06-21 ch 19, | And it's almost over- is it? As I have come to expect from you, high-speed, high-intensity action a la Matrix, touches of darkness here and there, the works. Everything I like. Aside, I find the title of the chapter strange. Redemption? Perhaps 'Conclusion' would fit more. (And Ayane almost scares Natsumi? That's something to think about.) Ooh! Vanilla gets an update! Yay! Sugoi! Good job! |
| Yatori Shizuku 2006-06-21 ch 18, | So that is the story behind the tragedy of the two lovers. It's so sad. But I guess in the Underworld, there is no space for private emotions. Good elaboration on a 'side' character's history and relationships, providing an insight into how Natsumi thinks. |
| Lady MeiLin 2006-05-17 ch 19, | Beautiful as usual. Left me with chills the entire time, actually. Can't wait for the next chapter. Meilin |
| Lady Silver fang 2006-05-15 ch 2, | Thanks again for reviewing my story, yeah I know it has a lot of grammer and other stuff wrong with it(that's pretty much like my other stories, u.u) Anyway! Another great chapter...and *counts her fingers* I belive 18 more to go. lol. Love ~LadySilverfang~ |
| Lady Silver fang 2006-05-14 ch 1, | WOW! I AM LOVING THIS STORY! ITS SO GREAT! ITS WONDERFUL!! *bows at your feet* (OK enough of that, lol) Anyway I really do love your story (though its only the prologue u.u) It's great! And I shall continue to read this! ^^ Love ~LadySilverfang~ |
| drakkarim 2006-04-14 ch 1, | i've read all of the adventus thanatos youve put out and theyre all very good. theyre all very dark and i like the character in this part. however, combining greek adn latin together in your title is a little bit awkward, because thanatos is greek for death and adventus is latin for arrival, so you're naming the story the arrival of death. other than that, good work. i expect for the action to heat up even more |