Wow, such a feeling of loyalty to this guy. You must have loved him. That question always comes up at some point doesn't it. Oh well, a beautiful poem all the same.

Keep it up.

Beatiful, wonderful. I think many people can relate to this poem. I'd recond ment fixing one thing though. In line 2, you use "but yet." you might just want to use yet, I think it'll give it a better work in Forever

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That was so delightful! I enjoyed that so much. You description was so good that I had a picture in my head. I love your poetry your an excellent writer!

PyroChica*

aw...so cute! TRue love thts what it is! well done.

aha..thts what many folks ask themselves. Would they do things for the ppl they love? Interesting , and of course well written!

talented, i've been a bit behind on reviewing lately so 4giv me.

is really good.

Aw.. and i know how this is too.. i went through the same thing.

Great, superb, wonderful

SWEET

o i know this feeling.. its dangerous ;)

and thanks for the reviews! you're a great reviewer!

Okay..I might be lynched for my usual love of dark romance, but I have to admit that I really loved the first chapter of this as a stand-alone piece. It seemed to get its point across that you loved the person so much that you were asking the question "would I cheat for him", and so it didn't need to be followed up. I always like the dark exploration of what could be. But they're both very good.

this is a really good poem _

this is a really good poem _

Thats lovely alex and besides the fact that its about me i have to say that it is one of your best works from a purely structural view great work , love you too x-Keith Andrew

dont cheat! it can be so tempting, but never a good plan. i love the guy you describe - i think many of us have a similar ideal, good poem, slightly different to your usual - in a good way. nice job.

Han.

I loved that. I love how you describe the guy. It was so smooth and lullabyie. If that makes sense. lol. Great poem.