I was wondering when you're going to update?

Ni-i-ice... I LOVE the end!!

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^-^ It was lovely!

I think you could do to elaborate a bit more than you have been. Otherwise good! And I agree! Ming definitely deserved that! ^-^

*cracks up* Ming deserved that last bit. SO much.

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^-^ Love it! Much better about the inconsistency in this chapter! Nice job! And I like the Princess bit! This is so fun!

There's your Sleeping Beauty... I like those conditions.

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Great story! I really like it! However...There is the matter of the discontinuity. Some bits aren't explained and it jumps around a bit much and uses times a bit...loosely. It's a bit hard to understand. Otherwise it's awesome! Totally write more!

Heehee! Niice...

Now, to see if Ming will be an ** or a good guy when he finds out what she really looks like. My vote is that he'll be, at least at first, an **.

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interesting...

I'm liking Yin already...

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It took me a while to read, but was worth it. I know, a review now, several years after it was written. Well, I like to go through older stories because they're usually something really interesting. Not sure if it should be rated K+ or T though. I think there was only literally one sentence that could have been re-phrased. :)

I liked this one too. very original. me likey.

Wow!! This story is really good! i can't believe i'm only the first reviewer...by this story's standards' i would've expected 100's! ^^ gr8 story!