(To satan) Locked away in black of night / Don't bother keeping up your fight

Thanks for the review and your thoughtful comments and advice. Life gets hard at times and I know there's always hope but sometimes, it's too much and you can't do anything but wallow in your own self-pity for awhile. But don't worry, I'll try and keep my head most of the time. It's always good therapy to vent some of my emotions through writing or drawing (art's my other hobby). I'm glad you got through the rough patch in your life and it seems like religion has done a lot to help. It's always good to have something to believe in.I hope you see this, since I couldn't post a review in your recent one since I posted already. This is also another great poem by the way. I find it an interesting choice of words of 'putting Satan under arrest'. I get a funny image in my head; if only it were that easy. Take care.

This sounds like it'd be a good song. I love Relient K. Awesome job!I also wanted to respond to your review of my song "I will Pray". Because you're new here, you don't know that about 3 or so years ago there was an author of FicPress that went by the name of Lucifer. He spent his time flaming all the Christians vehemently and writing poems involving the such. He eventually targeted me too and I wrote that as a response. It wasn't long before he got removed from FicPress for good. I know better than to think I have to forgive the devil. Still, I appreciate the wisdom. Thanks and God bless!

Haha! I like this! It is very RK sounding, I love the way you have the contrast between the subject and the wording. It looks like a great song!

Even though you're beautiful... So true. Love that line, cause it is so tempting to give in. Perfect.