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| Shuyan 2005-03-06 ch 1,  | abuseI must say me jolly 'ol chap that this was one of the best stories my jolly eyes have ever gazed upon. If you have a chance can you check out my story Sword of the rightful hand |
| Dancer27 2005-03-03 ch 18, | abuseYour story was pretty well written. ON some of the parts you moved along pretty quick. Like when Adrian was killing the 2 people. Maybe you could've added a bit more to that scene. But other than that, I liked your story. |
| kosovka 2005-02-15 ch 1, | abuseThis story is really going good so far. I like the mystery and suspense in it. You're really godd at the mystery and stuf like that. Keep up the great work. |