|Reviews for Alone|
| boy that you loved 2/24/05 . chapter 1
i found it quite cynical, but pertinent to every new generation.
'aptmyn, aptmyd, aptmyae, batditwwshfh'
| mormonboy 2/2/05 . chapter 1
This poem is me. Once again another great poem. Continue and keep it up. Thanks for reviewing my poem and I enjoy yours. Ur a great writer.
| Caorann fridh Bronach 2/1/05 . chapter 1
Very moving piece. I can relate to it, and I think it speaks a lot of truth. Your repetition makes it more appealing, and the imagery of sitting alone in darkness is very evident. Here's my favorite line: "So here you sit pretending to be braveWhile you fall apart inside"However, I really liked the opening two lines as well. Marvelous job! It's great that you can put so much expression into your work.
| Mistress of Eternity 1/31/05 . chapter 1
Captured it.. perfectly. This is so powerful. *bows down*
| TakeMyPhotoOffTheWall 1/31/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful! This was amazing. -applauds- I loved it! -Kelli
| Firefly of the Cosmos 1/31/05 . chapter 1
very emotional ur a very good writter, keep up the good work
P.S-thanks for ur review
| DarkPresence 1/31/05 . chapter 1
Wow. You have a great way of capturing emotions. I can totally relate.