My favorite was the last four lines. Very nice - it was sad, which makes it better. Beautiful to the end. Thanks for the review.

Oh, wow. beautiful, emotional stuff. Hang in there babe!

good poem. I wish i understood the meaning moreAs has been stated, i'm not good at offering comfort. nor do I know how best to do so. yet whatever i can do, i shall.

Don't get this . . . probably don't wanna get this. I do get a lot of sad emotions, a lot of um can't think of the word, but the emotion is there. The flow is there. It's a good poem. Good work.

sad, but very well written

Awesome poem girl! I love the line "So much emptiness, it’s overwhelming" I can really relate. Keep writing! *hk* Als