|Reviews for The Darkness In Me|
| BlackDreamLily 11/10/05 . chapter 1
whoa... and again, whoa... Somebody had a wee bit too much viaga me thinks- lol. Lovely adjectives!
| Jade Silver 6/10/05 . chapter 1
Makes the imagination work wonders. The single words create a whole new meaning.
| lordelfy 3/28/05 . chapter 1
col...sorry i am never good with reviews )
| wantedINheaven 2/28/05 . chapter 1
Woah, that's definitely different. And no, it definitely did not disappoint! Enrapturing..
Sorry I didn't get to you before this; my server was screwed and wouldn't let me access these pages. All fixed though! Yay!
| Kitty-brdg 2/5/05 . chapter 1
I like this poem. It's just, well I have no words that can describe it. lol.
Maybe for a Title, try using something that has to do with the lips, or go with the darkness idea. Darkness is lovely. lol.
Hope you find a title
| aeolyn 2/2/05 . chapter 1
Nicely done. Never saw the whole vampyre thing coming, but I liked it nonetheless _ Loved your word choice in this. Gave a nice effect on the poem.
| dustytiger 1/31/05 . chapter 1
very nicely written, and the vampyre thing was really outta the blue, very nice touch... suggestion for a title simply "love?"
| Faithless Juliet 1/31/05 . chapter 1
Great use of detail and imagry, I really like it, its unique and up the good work.