whoa... and again, whoa... Somebody had a wee bit too much viaga me thinks- lol. Lovely adjectives!

Makes the imagination work wonders. The single words create a whole new meaning.

col...sorry i am never good with reviews )

Woah, that's definitely different. And no, it definitely did not disappoint! Enrapturing..

Sorry I didn't get to you before this; my server was screwed and wouldn't let me access these pages. All fixed though! Yay!

I like this poem. It's just, well I have no words that can describe it. lol.

Maybe for a Title, try using something that has to do with the lips, or go with the darkness idea. Darkness is lovely. lol.

Hope you find a title

Nicely done. Never saw the whole vampyre thing coming, but I liked it nonetheless _ Loved your word choice in this. Gave a nice effect on the poem.

very nicely written, and the vampyre thing was really outta the blue, very nice touch... suggestion for a title simply "love?"

Great use of detail and imagry, I really like it, its unique and up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.