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| addie pray 2005-04-10 ch 1,  | abuseThis was lovely, the repetition made it stronger. I loved the last stanza, well done. |
| Bernita Bean 2005-04-10 ch 1, | abuseOMG That is so BEAUTIFUL! *Tear Tear* And sad in my opinion... |
| Ethereal Kisses 2005-04-04 ch 1, | abuseHeya, I'm reviewing quickly this time to make up for the last time! Love the poem, especially the repetition, and also the line "They come they go; all of them knowStereo woes and faded shoes.". I thought I caught a subtly dig at shallow music groups (did I?) who complain all the time, which was quite funny. I also like the line "The light will fall as darkness cries" which sounds full of feeling. ~ Ethereal Kisses ~ P.S Thanks again for the reviews :) |
| Emmytastic gal 2005-02-13 ch 1, | abusewoah. Wow what a concept. absolutely love it as usual. i like the vocabulary too... keep it up.write on...-Em |
| dustytiger 2005-02-08 ch 1, | abusei really like the mystery of this, and it's written so that it really flows, thank you for the review |