Very dark, and sad, I like it.

~VGT~

It's a well written poem, but I don't...feel anything behind it. Sure, this woman is suffering in the deepest parts of her soul, but you describe more her reaction, than the feelings. A dark and painful tale of woe. SCORE: 7/10

The Critic, Devil Dragon of Pain

Realy good, pretty creepy, yo could make a story of it.

i like ityou could make a story out of that probably..hmm

Wonderful! its like a mini story in poetry form. -^_^-

~*Shadow Rayn