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Yojireru Kihaku 2005-05-18 . chapter 13
HEY! I'm back. I've been reading alot so I haven't been reviewing for everything I read. From ur first story to this one is as far as I've gotten so far for ur work. I have a lot of reading 2 do so I'll leave it at this, c ya. YK
Oni Starwind 2005-03-31 . chapter 10
Oh my god. This story is complete.Why wasnt i notifed. Great Job On chapters 6 -10. Lot of emotion and story telling. Some stories dont need all the blood and action. All some stories need is good diolouge. And thats somthing this story has. Which kept me reading. To bad i have to go. I will read more Tormmorw. Later. And good luck with all your stories.

P.S. One quesiton what is a "wakizashi"
FreedSoul 2005-03-31 . chapter 13
I understand how you feel, it's the same with at least everyone who is writing their story and they already got through with the boring crap and fun stuff. I'm having the same problem with my other stories such as 'Kyrhise' and the one i told you about already 'DeathPlay'.

I like this chapter, and i'm fine if you ended it here. I'm not mad or anything, but really keep it up with the others...
Siren Xenophon 2005-03-31 . chapter 13
I know how you feel, I am not getting bored of my stories. . .it's just that Michi no Kanjyou is at a point were there are nothing but filler chapters. . .that kinda bugs me. . .and as far as Watashi o Yogoshite goes. . .i just can't write to that at the moment. . .too gall darn angsty. . .
Lost Soldier REVAMPED 2005-03-30 . chapter 1
Jeez...and you call my stuff crap; at least you're supposed to laugh at my stuff. There is way too much going on and too little explanation. Artificial action is not good enough to motivate a story, and short chapters fail to give enough plot. Oh, and the "father's killer" plot device is really, really lame. If you can't make these longer and more meaningful, but want to, then why do you put them up?
Kakyou Takashiro 2005-03-29 . chapter 13
teeh. i noticed somethings. ^^ you started to spell kakyou wrong in the later chapters, but you got it right in the early chapters. ^^ minor though. still nothing short of expected. ^^
SplinterX 2005-03-28 . chapter 1
hey you reviewed my fic "Purpose". I have to tell you...you have got some serious talent. I love the flashbacks and the story telling is unique and awesome. I also like the way that the story in some chapters doesnt really follow a sequential pattern and one chapter is solely a flashback. UBER HOTNESS!
jayblinkazn32 2005-03-14 . chapter 12
Hey, i'm letting you on a little secret of my NEW story! But i really don't know if you like horror stories so but its call 'Death Play'. Don't look for it until I post it up in the horror section. I tend to make this a 'horror movie'. Just to tell you on little something ahead. Sorry if i'm wasting spaces./_\ Well, later! And keep on writing!!
FreedSoul 2005-03-12 . chapter 12
Talk about rejection! He did all that for her to get out but she didn't want to?! Shoot, I'd get out a.s.a.p. This is a classic, from 1-10, a 10+. Maybe another +, hehehe...
FreedSoul 2005-03-12 . chapter 11
A very awesome chapter too!! Keep on writing this story, this is getting really good!! :)
FreedSoul 2005-03-12 . chapter 10
These are good stuff!! You REALLY have the skills! Cool chapter.
Siren Xenophon 2005-03-11 . chapter 12
::grabs a box of tissues:: WAI~! What is wrong with you people!?!?! ::cries for hours:: lol, anyways, i am really really really interested! It's like when you are reading a manga and you come to the end and they leave you off and the next volume doesn't come out for three months and. . .::glares daggers at tokyo pop and viz:: YOU PEOPLE DON'T PRODUCE FAST ENOUGH FOR ME!

Anyway. . .update soon onegai shimasu!

(Don't know if I need to say it again, but I love this story!)
Siren Xenophon 2005-03-11 . chapter 11
::laughing her ** off:: So I ** him to death with a broom. . .hahahahaha! I really like Yuki! Is Kakyuo gonna come back for her?!?!?! HUH?!?!?!?
Siren Xenophon 2005-03-11 . chapter 10
Yay! Identity stealing! . . .but I like Kakyuo's name. . .Anyway, yay! I like this chapter! And I like Yuki, she's cool.
Kakyou Takashiro 2005-03-11 . chapter 12
well, this was quite short... bOO. haha. it's okay i suppose. you're writing has always been enjoyable, and well, nothing less was expected.continue.

kakyou
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