Love it. It was beautiful. Keep it up.

-Lyn-

*cheers* AWSOME!! I know exzactly how you feel...Love the imagery, keep it up.--pammy-

this fascinated me greatly...*O.O*I liked the simpleness of it...great work,being one of yuor first was it?well well...you are a talented writer,so keep writing!*thumbs up*I kinda recognized myself in this poem..*lol*

*yours sincerly*

I like how you state that this is from a teenagers perspective, and I can definitely see how it is. It is ironic because you never really know when you're a teenager if someone is sincere in loving you. Interesting.

Bwahaha! Awesome poem! Yeah. . . it feels almost nerve wraking talking to someone you like, not knowing if they like you back. . . anyways. . one again, great poem! you should put more of your work up! ^_^

yay! john! loved it before and love it now! and stop acting like you're not a good writer cuz u are and ur name is gonna be right by mine on the shelves... well, just a few in between us cuz of the last name thingy! anyway, YAY and publish more! like that story u sent me. i'll read it if its here. i dont like the email thing. and if you want me to proofread before u post, i'll be happy!