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| Lynnie-Pooh 2005-05-25 ch 1, | Love it. It was beautiful. Keep it up. -Lyn- |
| xDistortedReALiTyx 2005-05-13 ch 1, | *cheers* AWSOME!! I know exzactly how you feel...Love the imagery, keep it up.--pammy- |
| Kanilla 2005-04-12 ch 1, | this fascinated me greatly...*O.O*I liked the simpleness of it...great work,being one of yuor first was it?well well...you are a talented writer,so keep writing!*thumbs up*I kinda recognized myself in this poem..*lol* *yours sincerly* |
| Luckie 2005-01-31 ch 1, | I like how you state that this is from a teenagers perspective, and I can definitely see how it is. It is ironic because you never really know when you're a teenager if someone is sincere in loving you. Interesting. |
| Tutube 2005-01-31 ch 1, | Bwahaha! Awesome poem! Yeah. . . it feels almost nerve wraking talking to someone you like, not knowing if they like you back. . . anyways. . one again, great poem! you should put more of your work up! ^_^ |
| befuddled 2005-01-31 ch 1, | yay! john! loved it before and love it now! and stop acting like you're not a good writer cuz u are and ur name is gonna be right by mine on the shelves... well, just a few in between us cuz of the last name thingy! anyway, YAY and publish more! like that story u sent me. i'll read it if its here. i dont like the email thing. and if you want me to proofread before u post, i'll be happy! |