I really like the premise behind this story. It seems really interesting. I definitely like Jessamine a lot; he's got an attitude and stands up for himself. I feel really bad for him because of his family's deaths. So sad. Lysander is a little annoying so far though. He's scheming something.lol And Robyn seems like he may be a good person. Poor Jessamine needs someone right now. Poor babe. Please update soon. I can't wait for more!

i like it...

update

I suppose the of this chapter was a little sweeter, but nonetheless I still want to know more a very good piece really

I'm really enjoying this story, I cant wait for more

Yah! finally another chapter. Keep it up. This story is really good so far. The way you write is just awesome.^_^

This is a great storyline, keep at it

Awesome dude! Next time make Lysander take all his clothes off and Jessamine follow that cue, Ill join in {*takes off sock*} Yeah! Parte. Cant wait for next Chapter!

Wow. very well-written story! Please update!!

OMG! I LOVE this story!! You're an amazing writer! I can't wait to read more of it!! Keep it coming!

Really good! I just hope you update sooner next time

your story seems really interesting and gripping...I really like Jessamine but I think that Lysander gets a little on my nerves...he looks too delicate for me...but anyway keep up the good work! cheers!

I came to check this story ut by pure chance and have to say im impressed i dont normally go for these kind of stories i ten to stick to the ones with the prince and the princess never the prince/prince, great story and i cant wait for the next capter its a very good plot you thought of there

A little ** the rape there, I hope it doesnt get too brutal.

wow good stroy so far, poor Jessamine! please update soon!

Update Update! DamniT! Luv yah story babeh!!