Don't you love how people say "no offence" before saying something offensive?

very nice, I hope you read some of my other work as well.

very touching i really like this piece, it holds somthing i cannot describe.

Ilike it. Especially the phrase "trying to become we".

I like it! love poems are sometimes so ... lovey in a weird way, i like it, it is truthful, love isnt fiction it is a feeling and never perfect. Just trying to make it work. great!

Very nice. I don't quiet understand if you had a rhyming scheme in mind but it flowes.

-Zodiac

Cool. Simple and powerful. Love it really. I know how that feels. keep it up.

Orien

It's wonderful, and I like it. Also I can relate to it too. Good job! And thank you for the review. _

It's good, i like it!