| Reviews for This Rose |
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Ivriniel 2/6/05 . chapter 1Wow, sad and beautiful *hugs* |
jus-me 2/5/05 . chapter 1outstanding as usual... I havent reviewed in awhile but you are still an incredibly amazing author... this poem is wonderful... I love the structure to the first part...and the second is equal in feeling but more of a free flow to it... would might more but short on time...Cass |
Eirien 2/1/05 . chapter 1Powerful poem, it has really touched me. The acrostic is perfectly executed as usual, and the second part sums it up very well. The image of the rose turning brown and wilted is very well chosen. I can relate to some of the feelings you describe, for instance not feeling beautiful, at the same time I want to cuddle you when reading this. You have such a beautiful personality, as is shining through in your mails and poetry. You are so precious. *big hug* |
dustytiger 1/31/05 . chapter 1the first bit with the words written down the side shows your talent at writing because it has so much flow and that's really hard to do with that kind of structureand the second bit was beyond powerful the words ring so true, you are a very talanted writer great job! |