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| The Bunny Personage 2006-03-11 ch 1,   | Hm very nice, but that still doesn't mention Elies of Tallest heehee. This will help me in writting my plot line I think. Although I almost feel like I recall it from somewhere, like it refreshed my memory o.o |
| Treyl 2005-02-01 ch 1, | Very well written. Excellent word choice, etc. Really, a good piece. The plot is definetly interesting and shows room and potential for growth. You have done an excellent job in showing us who Devon is, and of the situation with his father, the king. There are a few grammatical errors and misspellings and what not. If you'd like me to copy edit and more thouroughly critique this or any other piece, drop me an e-mail. |