o, that was prettyful, i muchly enjoyed this, whisperable yet solid, i dont know, i felt it morethan saw it this time, beautifully done

I love what you did with this structurally. It's fascinating how you have the first and last lines rhyming, and internal rhyme throughout the rest. It somehow fits the mood of the piece, as if something is mixed up and scrambled back together in an unsure fashion...but it is there. It's such a perfect reflection of the entire piece's mood. That was a really great idea.

I love the visual image of a flower growing up from the cracks in cement. It's a powerful image of hope. If this is your life story in a nutshell, I'm glad for you that it's turned out this way. May it let you write more beautiful poetry. :)

that is... amazing is the only word i can think of. really beautiful and moving

glad to hear it, wonderful write also my friend! :)

I apologize for how late this review is. I continually saved the alert as new in my mail box but i never got around to it. My deepest apologies for this.

wonderful work still, i loved the little excert in the very middel, beautiful work.

Great job!

that's beautiful! i loved it. very powerful, so keep writing!

wonderful piece. beautifully written with breathtaking imagery and heartfelt emotion. i love your writing. so intense and expressive, simply awesome. keep writing. ^_^

lovely. the first two stanzas' imagery was particularly vivid, but the last one certainly got your message across very clearly.

cheers,Lin.

I'm so glad to be reading another poem by you!! Beautiful and simply emotional. I love it. Beautiful and a gift to the lord. ^-^ Beautiful a sweet testimant to our lord. O.O ^-^

~* Noelle *~

As much as I dislike religion, I have to say this poem is one of the best I've read on fictionpress. I'm absolutely speechless...all of it is simply PERFECT! The second stanza particularly moved me, and it's so beautiful...*awed*. I admire your faith in god, congratulations, I suppose, for your baptism. love, Mia