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| Ladiebug 2006-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like it! It's refreshing that the main character is the rich kid, instead of it always being the guy.I like her name too, it's unique.Keep writing!=) |
| ebonyprincess 2006-04-25 ch 1,  | abusekeep going! i luv the way shes so self-centered!! its so much more believable. nice job |
| Tiffany 2006-02-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat's so cute, so far. I love how it's written, and I also love Adam. Can you give him more of an appearance description? That would be great. Email me when the next chapter is up! |
| les petits bateaux 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is very cute, you must continue this. I like Tea already, but I didn't know why she was already against Adam just because he was stuck with her in an elevator. The last line was really awesome and humorous. Well done. |
| Espantalho 2006-01-03 ch 2, | abuseHeeheehee...another great chapter :) I like the last line in particular. |
| Espantalho 2006-01-03 ch 1, | abuseI love this story so far! You're gifted for sure. Your sense of humor is really coming through, especially when you describe the smelly freshmen ;) Awesome job! |
| Idiot Pilot 2006-01-03 ch 2, | abuseThe main character is a bit vain, non? Ah, je parle francais... Not very well though. In fact, I'm horrible at the language. I find it interesting that the character wishes she would be in that, haha. I love how she loves her purse, and the descriptions. She seems like she could be a real person, just strolling around and feeding her less hot friends to the lions [or hobos]. |
| Rose Jameson 2005-09-01 ch 2, | abuseyour story is really good! I hope u continue writting! |
| Renzie 2005-08-18 ch 2, | abuseHahaha x) Loved the conversation with the hobo. Funny. Keep writing, please. |
| Hatching Game Plan 2005-07-14 ch 2, | abuseWow, this Marley chick is kind of a **! Besides the fact that she bought the poor guy lunch, though. But I'm thinking she did that just because A) She's rich and is able to pay for spur of the moment things whenever she wants and B) She was looking for some sort of entertainment. I like bitchy people; they amuse me. Please update! |
| idontgetit91 2005-07-14 ch 2, | abuseJust for future references, A-wall is spelled AWOL. Other than that, it's a good read |
| TaurusGirl7 2005-06-17 ch 2, | abuseomg how shallow can you get!?! |
| Eve Martinez 2005-06-09 ch 2, | abuseCool story, poor homeless dude :( |
| Psycho Parfait 2005-06-06 ch 2, | abuse*giggles* It's lovely! The ordeal with the homeless guy was priceless - totally hilarious. And I tell you, she does have a pretty good point with never forgetting your purse.. It can be DANGEROUS sometimes. Please continue, I can't wait to see what happens! |
| anchorgurl_12 2005-06-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is great so far! :) |