Eh, the feeling wasn't as strong as in some of your other poems, but it was still pretty good. I think you'd actually be a great songwriter given the effort. Sorta alternative/emo-ish. *shrug* Anyway, good work, and you're going on my fave authors. Keep it up.

-Marth

Very sad and haunting - a great ambiance (excuse my spelling) :)

Hope to read more from you soon,

Blessed Be,

Andaren x