Lol, that made me smile. It's good.

You mispelled straight. I reviewed. Are you happy?

I really, really hope that Taylor hasn't been acting up again... scary Taylor... But here ya go! It was good! You should really stick to writing! although your spelling could use a bit of a touch up...*cough* pleasedon'tdestroymewithpinkponies!MEEP!

good, i like the poem, ill be sure to review ur other ones, plz do so in return for me, i write love poems too, so i no wat ur talking about...heres a tip though, review others work and they will most likely review urs as well.

Hmmn; tut tut a poem to encourage reviews. V

Needless to say, it is definately well written without a doubt. You definately have a gift.

Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C

I have a few new poems up "Rocking Chair of Life" and a "Love" poem, "Rose Garden" If you fancy a read check them out and see what you think.

lol. yes, i dont get many reviews either. i'll go back and review some of yours, please do the same for me