VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL.

Not as impactive as "Rosa", but still without doubt a worthy addition to your collection.

Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C

sounds like lyrics taking out of a song... so true.

very touching. i really like just how much that says in so little words. great job.

I can feel this. Excellent writing!

beautiful, to put in one work. keep up the great work!

Shadows dance in the moonlight, i am simply the Pharoh that dominates them

Wonderful. And so true. Brava.

Short and sweet! Nice!

(Read my haiku "Torturous Torrent," it has three parts, and it's about well...that time of month...lol)

Again, you've done it! Beautiful, keep up the good work -

Love,

Anna

Sweet and well written, reminds me of the beautifull phrase:

"Life isn't worth living until you findsomeone worth dying for."

Argantlyn

Short and sweet and straight to the heart. Simplicity is grand! ..And so is your work! :}

interesting concept.. very paradoxical.. nice

Other people cannot match you in either short and sweet or long and epic, you master the extremes. Good

Concocted by,PSD

wow, that is really powerfull, which is amazing since it was so short. keep it up.

i love this. i could never write sumthing short but strong. u obviously can. great job! thnx for the review!

-kiran