*think* it's a song? Oy vei. All I'm saying. Anyways! Deja vu. I swear, I reviewed this one before. Because I'm a pain, I'll point out "I haven't forget about you" instead of "forgotten?" I like your line about waiting for a winner to be crowned, but it makes me sort of sad at the same time, you know? Especially when you put that image in the middle of a battlefield. Very interesting/nice/good touch. Aside from all of which, where have you been? I haven't seen you online in forever!

I think love is a battlefield is in a song... newayz that was a really good poem, i like that a lot. i love how u relate things, i think its called a metaphor or similie ( as u can tell i didnt get a A in language arts)

Katie

::sigh:: i can realte.. nice ending.. its very ambigious

Exactly what seems to go one within my twisted head, maybe not so uncommon. Great work.

Take Care,Brittney

Very nice, the end fits well.

I really like this one... But I said I'll wait... I"M JUST NOT PATIENT!