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| Yami Shizuka 2005-03-27 ch 1,   | A hidden meaning undescribable by words. Yet you have captured it perfectly in this piece. |
| The tribes tale 2005-02-01 ch 1, | the contrast in these lines add huge impact to this poem, the best one is " As my eyes of blue give way to tears of red..." The calm blue giving to the red of pain. PERFECT! |