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WarriorHeart 2005-02-02 . chapter 1
something that a lot of people can relate to.
silverquill212 2005-02-01 . chapter 1
Way to ban conformity! I admire your rebelliousness, the sort of "leave me be" attitude. Some days I feel like that and people just don't understand; I go off by myself to get away and they think I'm lonely or something. So I getcha. I'm not sure I could live my entire life like that, but if that's what you do, then yay for you. =]

Lovely poem. It makes sense. The questions help put emphasis on the points you make, and help to further the sense of rebellion. Excellent work.

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NightFallWolf 2005-02-01 . chapter 1
Beautiful *sniffle* I love it. I can realte to it alot.

One thing is...that the way you wrote the poem I get the feeling that though she says she doesn't care what society thinks she really does. The impression I get is that with this poem she is just proving how scared she is of not being accepted...she is lashing out becasue no one will accept her as she is. Well atleast that is what I got from the poem...

This is a beautiful piece and as a person exactly the chracter in this poem I can realte...For sometimes I feel like the comment I left abbove.

Great Job!
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