Reviews for Lying Next to him
Woody S 2/5/05 . chapter 1
Just glancing at the list of poems you have here, this was the first one to jump out at me. I like it. I think it's quite powerful. I like the way you always seem to refer back to the constant need for "him", whoever he may be to just protect you. A great piece. I loved it.
mizu no kokoro 2/3/05 . chapter 1
aw... how sweeti wish i had a place to run to, like you dokeep writing!
emotional-Teen 2/3/05 . chapter 1
Awesome... kinda reminds me of how i help my lover. Really kewl thou.
Frootkake Productions 2/2/05 . chapter 1
Aw...