it's not weird at all. in fact, i'd argue it's a theme that's written about a LOT. common, if you will. i don't ever get tired of reading it, though, not when it's written well. good job ) i like your beginning a lot. do me a favour and check out something i've written?

k8

wow, very powerful piece, with some great social reflections, and the daggar and the sucide really add to the sadness of it, well written

Great poem. I can relate sometimes. It had a very nice flow to it. I liked the wording of this poem.

I like it . . . the idea and concept are so original (esp on this site) . . . it's sad, but in a good way. Keep it up