|Reviews for This Dagger|
| she's not breathing 2/1/05 . chapter 1
it's not weird at all. in fact, i'd argue it's a theme that's written about a LOT. common, if you will. i don't ever get tired of reading it, though, not when it's written well. good job ) i like your beginning a lot. do me a favour and check out something i've written?
| dustytiger 2/1/05 . chapter 1
wow, very powerful piece, with some great social reflections, and the daggar and the sucide really add to the sadness of it, well written
| The Axe Man Cometh 2/1/05 . chapter 1
Great poem. I can relate sometimes. It had a very nice flow to it. I liked the wording of this poem.
| darkpaladin13 2/1/05 . chapter 1
I like it . . . the idea and concept are so original (esp on this site) . . . it's sad, but in a good way. Keep it up