That is extremely well written! And very creepy... gives me the chills! Bravo! =D Maranwe Telrunya

Wow, this was really good! Beautifully written, dark and is really appealing to the imagination! This is definantly going into my favorites!

Oh and by the by, thanks for reviewing MoS ^__^

Wow, great story, it's on the verge of being a poem, the words flow so well. If written any other way it might seem deppressing. Good job.

Very deep and somewhat dark stuff, but I like it. Keep up the writing my friend. If you were wondering on my story numb I just finished updating it today. So check it outKerry~

I'm not exactly sure what is going on, but it certainly grabs my attention and handcuffs it to a chair.

Nice job with the insanity bit. Almost vilanelle-ish at the end. Poetic and all that jazz.

Yeah, um, again, not quie sure what's going on other than his wife or whatever is dead and he tortured (?) her to save her soul (?)

Very itneresting...is there more? Me want more (::in Cookie Monster voice::)