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Reviews For: The Skewed Seasons: An Anthology

me
2005-06-02
ch 1, anon.
abusehey where's winter?your friend
Marzipans11
2005-02-03
ch 3,
abuseHm...

You certainly have a different translation of what the seasons seem to be to you. Very cool. :) Can't wait for winter (poem)! Are you sick and tired of the cold too? I do beg to differ on one point though-- fall, like spring, often has to defer to winter, its season shortened by the first winter storm. Granted, it makes sure its presence is still known (it's February and there are still dead leaves by now frozen to the trees) but it has less power to claim its own time in the face of overpowering long summers and early winters. Oh-- and "Summer in it's passion..." The "its" right their is possessive, so it's not a contraction of "it is;" it's spelled "its." Forgive the everlasting editor in me. :P
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