There is one word for this: nifty.

And very nifty it is, indeed. I like the concept. A couple of punctuation errors, nothing too drastic.

Cool, Really cool! I make up worlds too and mine really exist, Dont yours? :) Hope your gaspeople are happy!

hehehe... this is awesomely insane.. I love it..

lol, I really like this. I want a world...

Very... interesting. I can honestly say I've never read anything even remotely like that before in my entire life. Which is good...

ha, i love this. too funny, i enjoyed this story very much. do keep up the good work, it was very amusing. and if you have free time, could you maybe check out my story 'locked'? it'd be nice to have your opinion.

--blooming darkness