I like the jist of this...reminds me of a character of mine. (Hehe)

You had nice rhyme and meter at the beginning but got off as the poem went on. Was it intentional? Because I think it did in a way up the emotional status of the speaker.

Well, I like. Keep writing!

I love it how u write about stuff that actually happened- it's intersting- and i can't believe that i didn't write for this 1 alreadii LoLzz

O.o ! i realli like this one! LoLzzLyL

. you ish so talented, Pammy-love.

Hi. You reviewed my poem-Drug Danger (by Missgiggles2009) and thanks for writing a good review for me. At the time i thought i would look at your stories/poems. And at the moment i have only read this poem and i thought it was superb! It had a good message to are now on my favourite authors list.