Very good... Edgar Allen Poe is one of my favorite writers; your story has the sort of idea he might use, though it doesn't quite catch the wording- the style of E.A. Poe- but still, it is very well done! =D Maranwe Telrunya

whoa, that was strange. but strange also brings up originality, and originity is always good. this was excellently written, adn i loved the part with her as the 'puppet master' and the strings and stuff. it was very, very cool. awesoem story