 Rachel Gattina 2005-06-03 . chapter 1Wow, this is kinda cool. Nice job. |
 Alexz Lynn 2005-02-12 . chapter 1As you sis, I know exactly what you mean when you write some of this stuff. Midnight walks, eh? More like Sunday afternoon walks... :) Keep up the good work. I always thought I was the writer in the family, but it looks like I'm wrong. |
 Mettie 2005-02-07 . chapter 1Nice. I hate that, too. It's amazing how the little things (like hearing the end of your favorite song on the radio) can really get you down. Work on having the same number of syllables per line or at least having a pattern in the number of syllables to have some more fluidity, but otherwise, well done. Love ya! ~*Mettie*~ |
 Nicole 2005-02-05 . chapter 1 I concur about the radio & the growing up part! |
 Martha 2005-02-03 . chapter 1 WOW. i hear you! i love it. i love it so much that i'm printing it up adn sticking it on my wall. |