o...gah i know how this feels all to well...it hurts so bad, too..and the kinda sucky part is that even if you aren't together anymore and you know you'll never be..you'll always have feelings for them no matter what, i loved this

"If had had thought it through I would’ve been able to see." Wow, how many times have I said that to myself? You're touching on powerful issues, my friend. You've got some grammatical errors, but if you print them out for me, I'd be glad to go through and show you where you need commas, where you don't, and that type of thing. It's kinda hard in a review, but I certainly identify with many of the sentiments. Good job! Love, ~*Mettie*~

good job so far! keep writting!

cool. very deep. i like it.

very sad, it hurts when things dont work out