Oh wow very dark. Love it.

wow great job! i loved it

That's cool...and slightly creepy

Oh, wow. That was amazing. Very well written. Keep up the good work! ^_^

That was beautiful. It's exactly how my loves feel.

wait? what? that was awesome. Am I the only one who found that sexy? I hope not.

I want to read more of your stuff now but I have to rave for a sec:

I came because I saw you like the AB novels, and Amber books. I adore Roger Zelazny and I love AB. Go here: w.livejournal.com/users/blakesblog for an Anita Blake satire, but begin at the beginning. You have to be able to make fun of it -shrug- I get annoyed how people complain about the AB novels all the time and I still find it hilarious. And there's not much to say for Roger Zelazny other than he is incredible and needs to be read. He is also a great short story author, by the way. I hope you haven't been to the satire before. lol, i feel so conspiratory. I'll be back to read more of your stuff later, I really liked your poem. Ignore the wimpy review, I had to interrupt.

Hey, i liked this, alot.

Your poem rocked!! I hope you write another like that. It was really good.

ah...very beautiful poem, i love the way u put it together with the question and the answer, beauty is always in blood, this reminds me of one of my own poems a very old poem that i dont usualy share with ppl, this poem brings up some emotions in me, i guess cuz it ties into my life in the morbid sence, well any way im sure ur brd of reading this comment so i shall end it

=^_~= bye

eerie... but very poetic