hmm...It kind of reminds me a little of the poem "The Road Not Taken" by Robert Frost.

And that's a good thing, because that is one of my favorite poems ever.

nicely done.

i like it

This is great. It's always hard to write a rhyming poem and not make the rhymes seem forced, but you have managed to make your poem lyrical, it flows rather nicely. You mention that you are a prose writer, you should try to write poems in prose, i.e., lines that don't rhyme. Its a hard task, but if anybody can do it, you can. Your work on this site is excellent, very professional. You're a rare talent on this site, I must say.Excellent poem, great imagery, great flow. Excellent work!

p.s. Thanks for the lovely review of my poem 'Un jour sans la pluie', and further still, thanks for spotting that typo. I do believe it is 'mon amie'.