Very gripping. Even at 18 you could write so well and only to have gotten better. Good job with that.

P.S. I never thanked you for being the first to review my story. So thank you.

nice

wow. damn thats good tess. it kinda reminds of The Four Horsemen by Metallica,only its not about death. its really good.

Cool, very nice, enjoyed it alot. I liked how you did the first five lines. Keep up the good workBleedInkP.S. Got more stories up that you might get hooked too :P Thx for the review!

that was quite lovely! nice work.

HeyFirst of all, I like ur peom, its very good. I also must answer ur question for my story, She has blond hair because of the fact that one of her relations was not from that country, Ill get more into that in a much later chapter where something comes up conserning the question u asked :)