Eh, this was alright, but not as good as your other poems, I must say. The emotion and setting are there, but just there. It doesn't seem to flow all that well, in my opinion. I've seen better, but it's still decent.

-Marth

sometimes, i begin to wonder... is loving someone so much be considered as a sin that you pay for it dearly.. tragically, destroying you within.. and that person, not knowing anything.. more and more tearing you apart.