Tempting and lovely, filled with thought and connections. Beautiful,

-The Depths of Blue

Salut! Hey, I was looking through my reviews on this website, and I dont think I ever got your review sent to my e-mail, plus I dont come here very often...twice a year maybe? Anyhoo, I saw your review and I thought it was very well written and I wanted to thank you and I read this poem as well...

Heaven...perfection is what it's supposed to be, where the Believers go...but I think that if a person wasnt Christian or Jewish or whatever, and they were giving and loving and just nice, then they deserve to get in.

Love makes the world revolve.

Heaven is a fickle thing, I would imagine it being an endless sea with many ships and islands, but I would gladly live in yours too...as long as there was snow!

We need more accepting people in the world!

Great job!-Niggles

very vivid and descriptive. this is ideally how heaven should be. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

this is a great poem :) keep it up

that's exactly how it should be. I like your poem :)