Reviews for Hawk Eyed Girl - FictionPress.com

Thomas Wisdom 2006-08-15 ch 1,	abuseOoh...some sort of a predator we have here in Mirgana. She's interesting, nonetheless, if not a little scary. ^^Nice sketch. Kind of keeps me wondering what kind of heroine/villain she'd make in a story. ^^ Good job!
Syco 2006-03-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseWell, I have this thing about immediately starting a story without looking at the plot summary for long, then immediately stopping if it doesn't hold my interest. However...this story did hold your interest. The writing came across stronger than the average writer, quite a bit stronger actaully. I'd like to see more of the story to get a real bead on your ability because the story has me curious.
nadine 2005-02-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseAs this is a short piece developing characters, I'm afraid I can't exactly give constructive criticism - there's no room for improvement in my mind! I'm intrigued by the character of Mirgana and am definitely curious to find out what's going to "happen soon". Keep on writing!
An-Author-At-Heart 2005-02-03 ch 1,	abuseWow, very good! There's such an aura of mystery and suspense here that it's so intriguing. And this Mirgana - what a character! Actually, all the characters seem pretty well-written and created, you make quite good characters! I enjoyed reading this very much. Good job, keep on writing!