You're right, it can be a music video.

Although it changes from song to story, I love it. So cute!

I love that poem it is so unique adn good! Man, its like so good! Bravo! i give you 5-stars!

cute, real cute. lol.
KB

Wow. That was interesting, you're quite a great poet. I especially liked the ending with the poet and the guy. You should write much more...

But could you please check out ym story, The 840 Core? It's a futuristic war story.

-the prophesizer sees all.

This is very very good! Wow!

Beautiful ^_~

I love this song. It would make a great video.