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| PaulAsaran 2006-02-24 ch 1,   | I've never read a poem quite like this. Is it metaphore, or literal? Phantasy or reality? There are more questions, but those two alone are enough to send the mind through staggering possibilities. I like much. Very much. |
| Je-Nie-Dieu 2005-04-27 ch 1, | It's amazing. Here is a wildly good piece of verse, about Genghis Khan to boot, and it garners what...two reviews!? That is what we in the South call a crying shame. More people need to see your writing.The description of a double-peaked heart, and the axe, put the image of that heart splitting so squarely in my head that it rang. |
| addie pray 2005-02-06 ch 1, | I heart the pretty words like chocolate...and by that I mean to say well done, vivid imagery. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-02-04 ch 1, | CAMILLE! YOU POSTED! Why am I the first one to review your work? Does not anyone else know how phenomenally, excitingly talented you are? Your words cut me. And it's nice to finally have someone I really do know at this website. You put some much work into your poems, it's bewildering in the best way. I love this. I really do. You know I said yes to it, didn't you? You are being added to my favorite authors list. I made room particularly for you. :D |