It looks like I will be forever aspiring to be as good as you :)

How do you write so much in so little? could you take me as an apprentice?!?! please?? I love your writing style!

Wow, the singsong feeling and repetition made me think of when I was little and playing with my friends. Very pretty!

Gentle, uplifting and has a good solid feel to it. One of your best pieces I have read yet. Your use of repetition was good too, because of the short length of the poem and how you tied each line in.

So good! Ilove those first lines: "Blue skies means us,laughing after the rain of sorrow has gone."

Love your repetition of blue skies means us :) Very sweet poem well done.

2nd poem??good god..It has a nice rhythm..

The poem is good but I think you could do better be altering the ending lines..."The song in my heart, You have heard." seems out of place to me. Keep the Blue skies... theme going.

Nice work. ^__^ Teh heh, I like it.

Yeah, that wasn't one of my best... trying to work on rhyme. Lol. Thanks for the review anyways ^_^

You are such a talented writer Mandy! never change sweet thang!

It was a great poem! Thank you for writing it for me!

Beautiful. This was your second? God... Well it took me some time to actually get out a real decent poem. Keep on writing! You've got talent!

Really beautiful. Great repetition! And only your second poem? If you have the time, please review my 40th, it's called "lost" I hope to read more of your work soon- Write On

*Obsidian Eyes*