Wonderful! Simply wonderful!

Best regards,

Kira

Wow. I feel as though I'd have to read it several times before I could begin to truly understand it, but the imagery is just beautiful.

Lovely.

And that last line - well, the entire thing is just awesome.

I just finished eating dinner, and I don't feel like studying just quite yet, so I decided to read your latest work. :) It's wonderfully descriptive and haunting at the same time. I find it extremely difficult to compose short stories that are less than 1500 words, so the fact that you can pack in so much in so little shows that you possess a rare talent. Bravo!

This is so beautiful, and I was really moved by it, not only because I myself have had so many of these 'moments'. It's just so - true. Anyway, I loved it.