Oh, NOW I get it. I think knowing what's been going on for you was more important than the rereading, but... now I get it. And it's kind of awesome. Yep! Me likes... *cuddles* (I don't even know if that was the poem or you... Hmm.)~avidelecteur

This was really great-- One of your best pieces, I think. I think writing improves with age, and this just proves it.

This was awesome- just like one long train of thought just weaving in and out of things heard, seen throughout the day. Very, very well-written. The one-line stanzas really work. I love the way it just constantly moves. Beautiful.

Words cannot express how much I loved this. It was so...real, I guess is the word I'm looking for. And the last line is perfect for this.