This seems seemless and effortless, almost like a memory. I love the way that you use your verbs in unusual ways! I do have a suggestion. What if you used stanzas here and there, variation in the structure? Instead of an elipses, and then the next line immediately following, extend the pause further by making a stanza, or phrase. If you notice in alot of my poems, i simply make line breaks where they are needed, not where they 'should' be. Freeform poetry should be just that-freeform. Do whatever you want with it!

i love this poem. it's the best i've seen on fictionpress in quite a while, in my opinion. the mood of this poem is like the very essence of my world sometimes. it's very dreamy, like you could take on the world as long as you've still got that dream in your mind.