 catseyeview 2005-02-16 . chapter 1I like this, you tend to answer the questions as you go along reading this. It directly involves the reader to participate in the poem. |
 Thyrt 2005-02-15 . chapter 1cooleo...i liked it |
 Mettie 2005-02-07 . chapter 1I have felt all of those except the 'been loved or loved another' and it's hard. I can't tell you how many times I've wanted to be someone else - anyone else. Still, life goes on and my paranoia continues. Don't let your fears conquer you as mine have me. It's harder to regain control of your life than to hold onto it to begin with. Love, ~*Mettie*~ |
 dustytiger 2005-02-05 . chapter 1i really like this piece, the questions make you think, great job |
 Nicole 2005-02-05 . chapter 1 It moved me, in a nice way! |