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penismightier
2005-05-03
ch 1,
"The automobile is a concrete means to an abstract end."

Literary genius.
like a lover
2005-03-03
ch 1,
very fabulous.

my favourite part:

"She was something sacred,smothered by the common thrivers,and beautiful. The call theultimate truth "the light",so I bought her a lightbulb.Morning still flutters throughher heavily-draped window, regardless."

i don't read much poetry like it. i thought it had its own kind of specialness. :)
tablesalt
2005-02-09
ch 1,
Ah beautiful poem. Seemed slightly sarcastic to me, and I loved it. The call the/ultimate truth "the light",/so I bought her a lightbulb./Witty (= Keep on writing.
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