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| penismightier 2005-05-03 ch 1, | "The automobile is a concrete means to an abstract end." Literary genius. |
| like a lover 2005-03-03 ch 1, | very fabulous. my favourite part: "She was something sacred,smothered by the common thrivers,and beautiful. The call theultimate truth "the light",so I bought her a lightbulb.Morning still flutters throughher heavily-draped window, regardless." i don't read much poetry like it. i thought it had its own kind of specialness. :) |
| tablesalt 2005-02-09 ch 1, | Ah beautiful poem. Seemed slightly sarcastic to me, and I loved it. The call the/ultimate truth "the light",/so I bought her a lightbulb./Witty (= Keep on writing. |