may I see the picture that you drew?

very nice. i loved the view you took- when men are told what they really are, they go all insecure, and from being all strong they just become puddles- weak. interesting point, and very well written.

This...oneshot was...amazingly good...!
It's simple enough to catch my attention, and very pretty.
I know, I know. Who would describe a man melting as pretty?
I just loved the last few parts:

"She threw her drink on top of what was left of him and stormed away, finally feeling free from the weight that had been shut in for so long.

A sign sat innocently near the puddle that had once been a man. On its yellow self, in bold black letters it read: Caution: Wet Floors."

It's truly amazing(yes, I'm aware I have a very limited vocab. but pft) and I'm surprised that this story didn't get reviewed more often.

Dude. That. Was. Awesome.
-THANK YOU!-

it's intruiging, i like it. might i see the picture?

Interesting and different...God bless!

Huh, I just noticed I never reviewed this story (even though I've read it several times.)

I'd love to see the picture!

My email is in my profile. You pick the best topics to write about.

o, hey, tis me again. I would love to see that picture! you;ve got my email, right?

kudos, dear. I loff the story.

Haha, that was a very interesting and entertaining read. I hope I never have to melt into a puddle!

Good thing all men aren't like that, even if it may seem like it. :P

Well. Certainly interesting to know that if you tell a man what you think of him, he'll turn into a puddle. I'll remember that.

Please send me the link (via email), I'd like to see it.

Wow. That went deep. Please send me the link - I'd love to see the picture.

very very VERY satisfactory

please send me the pic! xxcerise@yahoo.com

really funny fic, I love it!:D Yeah! Could you please send me a link for that pic? My email address is jehull_219@hotmail.com, THANX!

id love to see that picture if u would email me the link. very good sotry, it has depth.

Wow. That was unlike anything I have ever read. It was amazing! I'd really love to see that picture you based it off of. Send it to my e-mail, please! Thank you, and keep writing!