The imagry is amazing, painting a picture. Isn't it funny, you describe the action with the action itself? Like a million little circle-spirals forever into themselves.
Ah! Lovely! This is a wonderful tribute to the art of writing. "The lick of surreal ink paints the night" and "Your Pygmalion" are so beautiful. They echo in my mind; I am inspired!
This is going on my favorite stories list. Why hasn't anyone else reviewed this??